#1
K so this is one of my first songs..

Yes it is repititive..
I know but i cant help it because i've bin playin for no more than 1 and a half year and never took a damn lesson..

There wasn exactly a song structure in my mind.. Also, please excuse my terrible drums but i jus had to put the stuff like it.. I personally like my drums, but people have told me they suck so i am not sure how u'll guys like it..
Thanks for checkin it out and pass me urs il check it out too..

Good day!
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#2
mmm... not of my likes but still i think it's pretty creative, but i think the rythm guitar gets anoying after a while, and the drums are trying to be too epic, besides that great
#3
Hmm, Between bars 46-48 the stabbed chords sound a little out of key for my liking.


Pretty good structure and all, just that tiny little comment and also ofc, as you said the repetition.


IMHO I woulda used chords other than Emin and all the Power chords, but that's just me .


So a bit more variation, maybe a more interesting bassline and there ya go really.


oh, and i LIKED the drums, no matter how hyperbolic they were to the song