#3
Out of key?? Sounds like something Slipknot would write...and dont take that as a compliment. Throwing around notes on any random fret just does not sound good at all. Sorry.
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#4
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Out of key?? Sounds like something Slipknot would write...and dont take that as a compliment. Throwing around notes on any random fret just does not sound good at all. Sorry.


Nah, its not out of key and this doesn't sound ANYTHING Slipknot would ever do. I bet you don't listen to extreme music.
#5
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Nah, its not out of key and this doesn't sound ANYTHING Slipknot would ever do. I bet you don't listen to extreme music.

Well explain how it is not out of key. Youre using every single fret.
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#6
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Well explain how it is not out of key. Youre using every single fret.

sorry bro, but this is just a pretty standard DM song. Slipknot would never realease somethign like this.... ever. but to OP, even though its pretty standard, its a solid DM song. It jsut to me had a bit too much speed picking, but it wasnt bad.
#7
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Well explain how it is not out of key. Youre using every single fret.


Im using Chromatic scale
#8
Well i liked it man!!
When you play it it sounds so much better!

I agree that the trem picked parts were at times a bit too much, but thats what death metal is so yeah, overall i thought it was pretty solid.

Could have used a bit of variation here and there but good work man!


https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1243338

have a listen to mine?

ta!


Edit: youre 14?!
extra kudos then mate!
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"I am Osiris" at 2.22 i like how it goes "BA-BA-BA-BA---Ba-Ba-Ba-Ba---BA-BA--Ba-Ba-

its badass.


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