#1
Hey guys, first song that I am for sure using for my new band.
Any suggestions? Any parts that you think are really powerful and stand out to you a lot? I know there is one part that needs work on the transition that is at bar 105 so if you have any ideas, please lead the way

Thanks,
Cameron

P.s.
The Semi-tech thing is really just because of the time signature changes even though it still plays like its in 4/4.
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#2
Excellent job on the 9/8 intro, it flowed extremely well. Odd timing without being jarring. Happiest metalcore I've ever heard though. I really enjoyed this though.
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#4
ya this is the happiest metal i've heard haha

I was expecting brutal lizards preaching about the Rapture, I was lied to!
"Our revenge so everlasting sweet,
Enslave your Children, Behead the weak,
Kill every last Man, Woman and Machine
The cleansing has begun.
Your meek defense is foolish,
we come from the stars a trillion strong."
#5
That could mostly pass as post-hardcore, or sludge based post-metal. If it weren't for the trem picked section and the 2 chug chug breakdowns.

It was simplistic and a bit minimalist, but it was great. The entire song flowed very well.
The only thing I think that could be improved is the leads and solos. And by that, I mean mostly the solos.
They need bit more punch to them, as they aren't all that memorable.
It doesn't have to be hyper-technical, but more accenting could go a long way.