#1
And It make me happy if anyone listened to it and gave an opinion. Ill return the favor.. Fancy That
#2
When the ditortion kicks in you fall out of time, but you got it back. Overall I liked it though. I liked the way it was layered.
#3
vouch the comment on falling out of time for a sec, just work on that a lil. also, I thought the tone for the distorted part was rly bad and made that part sound shitty. experiment with settings and see if u can get a nice distorted sound and work on ur tone.
#5
It was terrible at the end I know.... Really bad... but I had a drum track behind it but I suck at the drums and that threw off all timing.... but I just threw that on there cuz I was in the mood to play it.... It was a one tack recording..... thanks though.. Im using a squire and my amps distortion is bleh...
#6
that was really good.. i would definitely look into learning how to sing, or if you can sing writing some lyrics. or finding a vocalist/ forming a band

good stuff