#1
Hey guys, this is a song titled "wait and see" about the ignorance people have about depression and suicide. Just check it, and of course c4c.
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#2
songs not bad but seems very deriviative of GnR. the vocals could have been a little higher in the mix. guitar solo was pretty good but i'm betting you could do better.

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#3
yeah, there was a defintely a gnr influence, riffs were decent, drums were alright, vocals were decent. personally, i didn't like the guitar tone alot, but it was alright. from i can hear, lyrics were decent. also, sometimes the singing isnt together, but only by alittle.
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#4
Hey man, thanks for the crit. This is pretty cool. Like the others, can defo hear G n R, sounds like Chinese Democracy era, but I really like that so it's a good thing. All in all it sounds well recorded and the playing is tight. It just sounded like it was missing a little something, myabe throw some more changes in there. Other than that there are some minro timing issues but nothing huge. Overall, pretty good.
#5
yup... it is heavy.. it has an old school value in the song.... I think it needs some remix for the vocal...

the song is good.... check out min??


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#8
so ya know what I'm wondering? This song is heavily influenced by GNR, and did I get that thru? Do you guys hear the GNR in this? You do? Good. Thanx for the critz, guys. I'm goin' back and crittin' yours.
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#9
I see a bit of GNR in the vocals, not so much anywhere else. It's got a good catchy riff, solo was pretty good. Wasn't a big fan of the intro effects before everything else kicked in, but that might just be because of the poor quality.

Thanks for the thoughts on my song.
#10
Wasn't too keen on the intro, seemed a bit barren, although when everything kicked in I really enjoyed it.
Vocals were good generally, although they were sometimes messy and the sort of half speaking secondary vocals sounded a little out of time at some points. Not to worry though, I think with a little vocal mixing this one could be great!

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1254965

Peace.
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