#3
^Might have meant more if you actually listened to it. Unfortunately for you, there is a 'my listeners' part in my profile dumbass
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#4
Ouch. t'is a good effort dude but I can't say i'm a fan of the tone used at all, no warmth to it at all. Also this solo should be played with a a lot of feeling and emotion - I think that's what it's lacking. imo it's one of the Gilmour's finest moments and I don't think you did it much justice bro.

Work on your bends I heard many of them are out of tune, and try implement a wider, smoother vibrato. Overall a nice effort, I do think you may have bitten of more than you can chew with this one however - none the less, look forward to hearing more stuff from you.
#5
**** these guys, i know there is emotion in there, they are just jealous man, keep it up.

edit: who the **** even plays guitar without emotion or feeling?

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#6
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edit: who the **** even plays guitar without emotion or feeling?


....this guy maybe?

I was giving some f**king constructive criticism, don't make me out to be a dick.
#7
^I get what you're saying man. I was obviously playing with emotion, but it doesn't mean I necessarily showed it well in my playing. Anyway, thanks for the criticism
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#9
I could tell it was good playing, but turn the distortion way down man. Your notes are indiscernible with the amount you have on.
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#10
I liked it I'm learning this song now so I appreciate the work you put into it. These guys are right about the tone, I use a big muff pi to play it and it sounds much nicer. Too much treble will kill it. Also, avoid letting the open strings ring out as much (work on the muting).
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#11
The tone completely ruins it for me however you can definitely get it sounding good once that is sorted out. Good job.
#12
Yeah I agree, can't stand the tone, however the playing is good for the most part. Just a couple of bends were off. Like someone said to me, tone takes 5 minutes, playing can take a lot longer, so well done

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#13
Nice dude, you should cover Mother!
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#14
nice man, the only minor thing is, sometimes it seems like ur just scraping the first note it on time when it should flow into it a little bit more, but amazing mate much better than i can do

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