#1
Hey guys

Heres my latest tune, its called Manchester rain.

My friends going to add some piano licks, and I'm going to get a female voice to do some harmony but you should get the idea! Any improvements and critiques desired.

I've put all my songs up for download, so feel free to download them, and give them to your friends!!





Say Goodbye now,
and Breathe your last Manchester Breathe
Sat Goodbye now
and hold onto what you have left
Say goodbye now
and let the tears roll down your face
you know every time it rains
I'll be thinking of this place

Did we make the most of?
Never thought I'd miss the rain
I know that we cant go back now
But we'll meet, we'll meet Again

I know the sun is shining somewhere
But I dont need it anyway
You know the rain will never stop me
From coming out to play

Did we make the most of?
Never thought I'd miss the rain
I know that I cant come back now
But we'll meet, we'll meet Again
#8
really really like your stuff. Well put together and good vocals. mind crit'ing the stuff on my profile?
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