#2
hate to say this but it doesn't work, at least as is. the rhythm guitar was nice, i liked that. the lead is chaotic at times and doesn't really fit in well with your rhthm track. some of the lead was very cool but not for this track. the other thing is it would have sounded better if the rhythm track was on one side and the lead on the other. te way you have it now makes it sound very messy. a bettr balance between rhthm and lead would also help.