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critique for critique. meaning you'll check someone elses out if someone gives you input. As for the cover, steven lynch is awesome, so nice choice. Only thing I would say (for constructive criticism) is that you should use more breath support to make it less airy in the throat. and the little mistakes at the middle / end that you mentioned. Good cover though. Check my Switchfoot cover out.

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