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this is kinda cool. Not to be dick, those lyrics are pretty great, it's just that anyone would rarely take that srsly with that voice lol, wait 'till you hit puberty and you've got yourself some gold. The music, it's real trippy I guess, pretty enjoyable even a bit repetitive (and simple) I also think you should invest in a better mic. This has some potential, but you're young so you'll gain some experience and probably in the future you'll churn out some good material. I know how it is (well..... was)

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1244557