#1
A flightless bird with broken wings.
Our minds are simply fragile things.
Grieving for a child with no name.
And I have nothing to show for it.



C4C
Last edited by Coheed777 at Dec 15, 2009,
#2
This is actually really clever, it packs a lot of punch for such a short piece. The first two lines were weaker than the last two, though.