#1
Doesn't have bass, couldn't be botherfed adding it, it just follows the guitar. THis is my first full song, so comments and constructive criticism would be appreciated.
Attachments:
Full.mid
#2
Sounds like I'm playing an X-Men game from the super-nintendo era...I can appreciate the work that went into it, but I think I'd have a better idea of a metalcore song that wasn't constructed as a midi-file, however. Not that it sounds bad, though, keep up the good work, would love to hear the real recorded version.
#3
I think the first 50 seconds could use a bit more work. It sounds very un-melodic and very unnapealing. Also, for a metalcore song, it has almost no structure. It's just random riffs thrown at you at random times. Maybe you can make it more flowing and structured. It's also a bit short for the amount of riffs you have in there.

It's ok but not good. It has good riffs but I just think that you need to clean it up.

nice work.