Squares
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Join date: Dec 2008
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#1
Hey all.

This is my first of 2, possibly three submissions to the Electronica Contest thread. I figured i might as well post it as a full fledged, Critable song while i'm at it , so enjoy!

Crit for Crit as always.

I'd also appreciate some ideas as to where to go from the end of the string breakdown. I couldn't think of anything but rephrase my first riff :\Please and Thankyou ^_^
Attachments:
The Party Bus!.zip
AYE! if you LOVE

FOXY SHAZAM!
Ze_Metal
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Join date: Jan 2008
96 IQ
#3
Haha right off the bat I noticed the colors for the track and thought it was cool =]

Intro is very cool, I've never heard techno with guitarpro so im very interested.

Bar 29 it picks up, this is quite cool ^.^

37 even more awesomeness. Tell this took a lot of work.

There's that repeat at bar 60 which makes it appealing for the listener.

Alright so overall this has been a new experience listening to techno on guitarpro and after hearing it I kind of want to try! It's short though, maybe its a work in progress? But it's still awesome I loved it.

I honestly can't give a rate because like I've said i've never heard anything like it on guitarpro but I'd give it a 9/10 as far as the song goes! Keep up the good work
Squares
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Join date: Dec 2008
60 IQ
#4
Quote by Ze_Metal
Alright so overall this has been a new experience listening to techno on guitarpro and after hearing it I kind of want to try! It's short though, maybe its a work in progress? But it's still awesome I loved it.


If you liked it, keep an eye on my threads, i've got loads more coming!

Or you could look at the ones in my sig. You don't have to crit them, just if you're intrested.


Also, my buddy Defiance64's hosting an electronica competition as we speak. The deadline for submissions is tomorrow if you think you can have something done by tomorrow


If not, you could judge if you'd like.


lol. Happy tabbing
AYE! if you LOVE

FOXY SHAZAM!
kskksk
Registered User
Join date: May 2005
10 IQ
#5
Wow, this is the shit. Awsome 10//10. I too have never seen an "eletronic" song on guitar pro. You have tallent.
Last edited by kskksk at Dec 17, 2009,
~Flounder~
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Join date: Apr 2007
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#7
song is well-put together, and doesn't have any "mistakes" or "wrong notes" per say. That being said, though, the chord progression and main anthem were highly uninspired. As a person who listens to hours of trance and electronic a day, I can say that while I haven't heard this exact song before, I have heard many cookie-cutter 'trance' songs that all seem to blend into one big, repetitive, genre clump that your song would fit into.

Pros: great editing/mastering, everything is where it needs to be and at the right volume level, pan, etc.

cons: overused bassline, guessable anthem, no followup riff to the anthem (which sometimes happens in techno songs).

5/10
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#11
I remember Squares, he was a good fella
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