Loving the ambient feel to this, definitely something I would buy if recorded. The groove works really well with the drums, it has a Dream Theater feel to it with the drumming and the guitar work.

I reckon you're going in the right direction with this, love all of it but especially bar 43 onwards.

Sorry for the not so detailed crit, there wasn't really much to crit IMO, overall very well written, I admire the work you put into the drums and the chord progressions you used, all of them fit very well and I would love to hear it when it's done!

If you have the time, can you please crit mine in return? You don't have to as my crit on yours is rather short and ass kissing.