#1
MP3 on my profile.

I wrote the main piano melody line on my acoustic guitar ages ago and I loved it. Yesterday out of boredom I wrote it up in Mixcraft and had a play with it. I was quite impressed by how it came out.

How is it at the moment, and where can I take it?
Thanks.
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Last edited by Vauxite at Dec 17, 2009,
#2
Sounding good. I like the drums, they sound awesome. At first when the strings came in I wasn't too sure where you were going but it sounds great. It's sounding fine at the moment, so I believe it should sound good wherever you take it from here - maybe some harmonization? haha. that's just me, I like the whole chord feel to it, simple in a nice way. Keep up the good work .
#3
Quote by Kämpfer
Sounding good. I like the drums, they sound awesome. At first when the strings came in I wasn't too sure where you were going but it sounds great. It's sounding fine at the moment, so I believe it should sound good wherever you take it from here - maybe some harmonization? haha. that's just me, I like the whole chord feel to it, simple in a nice way. Keep up the good work .


Thanks very much for the feedback
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#4
Quote by Vauxite
Thanks very much for the feedback


haha no problem, any time
#5
Smooth intro, you could add more to it if you wanted, it's pretty cool how it is though. It's not too repeditive, but the pace gets a little boring, as for where you go with it, the beat needs to change or else it gets boring. That's what I'd do anyway.

here's mine if you want:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1246616
Last edited by stratkat at Dec 17, 2009,