#2
Snow Day Rave

Very nice intro, sounds similar to an early The Who song.
Add another synth in there, after a while the sound of the same synth become a bit tedious, great riff though.
Outro seemed to fade all too quickly, apart from that, brilliant.


Sugar Overdose

Again with the synth tone.
Try adding a more prominent bass beat, gives it more of a dancing groove.
Other than the above points, very good work, keep it up!
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#3
Quote by Vauxite
Snow Day Rave

Very nice intro, sounds similar to an early The Who song.
Add another synth in there, after a while the sound of the same synth become a bit tedious, great riff though.
Outro seemed to fade all too quickly, apart from that, brilliant.


Sugar Overdose

Again with the synth tone.
Try adding a more prominent bass beat, gives it more of a dancing groove.
Other than the above points, very good work, keep it up!

Thank you for commenting both and listening^^
#4
Hey hey! I find this funny because I did a trance song not too long ago! lol.

SnowyDayRave I think needs more layers and needs a stronger bass beat in there, very uplifting tune though. I liked it.

SugarOverDose Was even better than that one. You could stand to speed the songs up a little maybe like 10-20bpm and make that bass sample stand out a little more. The hat track sounded good though.

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