#1
one of my bands original compos!!!!please crit c4c!!!!

not yet complete...will add the second solo as soon as its finished!!!!
Attachments:
wartorn.gp5
#2
hey man , heres my crit

bar 1 - 8 :
sounded great , nice riff , nothing to add

bar 9 - 10 :
didnt like it , because it sounded cinda random , transition would have been just as good without this part

11 - 26 :
again great , nothing to add

bar 27 - 38 :
cinda dragged on a bit because it sounded almost the same as the previous parts

bar 39 - 48 :
nice , but again too similar to the rest

bar 49 - 52 :
nice , even the second time

bar 53 - 60 :
liked it , allthough again very similar to the rest

Pre-Solo :
Very nice , nothing to add really

Solo 1 :
again very nice , nothing to add

Solo 2 :
no comment , since its not finished yet

bar 109 - 126 :
liked it , nothing to add

127 - 134 :
didnt like it , would sound A LOT better if you would let it fade out without repeating it.

overall
you had a lot of nice riffs in there , allthough they sounded very similar and made it cind of drag on because of that , so i think you may need to add something different here an there to make it more interesting.
also i can hear a very distinct Iron Maiden cind of sound , wich you nailed pretty good , but it just lacks that little extra.

8/10

can you crit any of my songs ? there in my sig.