#1
Wrecked: I'd put this one in a hardcore/metalcore sort of setting. This is my first post, cheers for any crit.


I am a wall made of stone
Becoming torn down
This is a heart attack, waiting to happen
You are a statue, made of glass
With cracks appearing
This is a heart attack, waiting to happen

Slathered with guilt, we are wrecked
But you forgot that I remembered everything
Right down to the lies you told
Each and every one

I am a candle made of wax
Melting by the hour
This is a heart attack, waiting to happen
You are a portrait in denial
Complete with the fakest of smiles
This is a ****ing heart attack, waiting to happen

Slathered with guilt, we are wrecked
But you forgot that I remembered everything
Right down to the lies you told
Each and every one

You can’t take back the words you said
I can’t forget the words you said
You’re gone
#2
i only have two things to say about it. 1. LOOOOOVVVVEEEEE it
and 2. can you notify me with a link when you post so i dont miss anything
i love your style here
absolutely killer
Sorry if Ive offended some kind of Punk God I should brush up on my Commandments of Punk maybe copy down the Punk Bible a few thousand times so I don't forget again sorry for my error O Punk Master Of All Things That Are Punk .
#3
wow everything she said....i really dug "Slathered with guilt, we are wrecked
But you forgot that I remembered everything
Right down to the lies you told
Each and every one".....really great. i enjoyed this.thank you for posting.