#1
(Breathe For Me)
Not my type
Oh you can be negative
as it seems the world has given
given us all an
ever
constant
erection of the
mind.
It's getting ever
harder to think, and two twice may or may not
void this warranty.
Warrants to kill, warrants to live,
and the screen would have me believe
that last time I died I came alive.

(Inside)
This wave,
this sensation,
nation,
retardation,
comstipation of thoughts,
then running free with a chill
laxative force fed by all
those men in the park
promising my mind an experience
that truly living
could not reach.

(Out on the Ins)
Purpose you've found it
telling
others what their purpose
should be
in the book
made
by the same who would
take a one-way to that happy place,
He knows is
Everlasting in
Last worded
Lunacy.

Please release me, the shackles
right on
the left have put my
tubes in a
com
pro
miserly
place.

And we all know how that feels.
#2
I think this was probably overly metaphorical...I can explain each part if anyones interested...

>_>
.
<_<
Last edited by CaptinSpalldin at Dec 19, 2009,
#4
Quote by CaptinSpalldin
No comments?

No. lol

Its pretty good. I read and forgot to comment.
what is there to explain? I understand it.
Last edited by mikeskiboshski at Dec 19, 2009,
#5
Well it seems hit-or-miss on the S&L community, sometimes everyone can divine the most complicated meaning from something, and at other times people just......