#1
Writing a metalcore song, i've started it out, but can't decide wat to do with te rest of it. Any help would be appreciated, and any opinions on the song so far.
Attachments:
unfinished draft.gp5
#2
Well...to start off..I'd LOVE to know what key you're going for, because you have like...3 or 4 different ones mixed into each other, and frankly it sounds bad. I'll upload a version that stays in one key in a while.
Poop.


Yes, poop.