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So this is a poem alot of references and metaphors comparing shit man. think of people, the sun as a heaven, the snake as evils in the world, indians as the inocents becoming victims of the evil of life, the bird someone to help me out of the evil dark place, and the sun where i want to be, it'll al make sense like that. well here it is

Bird In The Sky
Oh bird in the sky
Oh bird in the sky
I see how you fly
won't you come down so i can say goodbye
bird in the sky
take me to the sun
where i started
don't make me run
oh bird in the sky
WAKE UP!
the serpent is at the lake
cold pale skin
baby run with me
take my hand
the bird is already gone
now were singing a different song
run to the west
the west is the best
sun rise
oh sun rise
no men can be born into a moon's delight
sun, sun shine so bright
that snake is behind me
night helps him, his friend
I can't see
I'm the keeper of the sun
I can shine light among
Realms of dark bliss
Evil delights
king of the sun
shining bright
fight the snake
c'mon baby ride my snake
it's long cold and hard
pastor's daughter kissed the snake
in the village of the indians
the snake eat's their skin
innocent,agony,lies
viscious brains and sweet delight
only time to die
only time to die
faces, odd, distinct, blank
scare me, who is this
how strange in the black of night
who are the people
have fear of the night
oh bird in the sky
nature's delight
pick me up
bring me to the west
where the sun shines birght
keep me there
the snake roams in the night
oh bird in the sky

what do you guys think??
peace and love guys
Gonna make the mountains be my home....

"A box of rain will ease the pain and love will see you through"-Robert Hunter
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anybody have thoughts on it?
Gonna make the mountains be my home....

"A box of rain will ease the pain and love will see you through"-Robert Hunter
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