#1
Here is a new power pop-ish indie rock song I am working on. Haven't finished it yet, Here is what I have for the lyrics so far, and the music with no vocal is in my profile. What do you think?

The last time i saw Johnny
he was up in his room
making out with his hand
I said what is wrong with you boy
surely you have something better to do
Hhe muttered, no
I must be left alone
so I shut his door tight
and i shook my head wondering

Johnny, are you lonely?
you know if only
you know if only
you had some friends
maybe you'd only
get out for a while
but you need the fresh air
I say Johnny, are you lonely?
well I thought that you were
until I heard the music playing upstairs
So... Jeff Lynne is still making music.. all is well.

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#3
I listened to that first one on your profile. I will check out your other stuff later when I get some more time! Thanks for the crit, bro!
So... Jeff Lynne is still making music.. all is well.

Check out my Ebook!: Yogi Jam!