#1
Okay well, I posted a thread with these and people thought it was just for coming up with a title XD Now I just wanna see what people think of the lyrics.

C4C

Intro (Spoken)

This venom
eating me alive
Won't cease to the healing touch
cuz the doctor's a lie
the doctor's a..

(scream)Lie!

Verse:

Ailments abound
Coursing through my veins
and you just sit there and laugh

Watching as systems fail
tonight by the bedside
in your loving hands
and it's all just a lie

Verse:

The feeling of regret
taunted by mishap
dies away
poison stays

And tonight my only friend
is the beast growing inside me
failures tattered
on my sleeve again

Breakdown:

Tonight
the ghost fades away in the wind
Silence envelopes
the comatose friend

No chorus as I'm going for a progressive type metal song.
#2
Sounds like you been in the hospital are someone close to you has. It's good though.
In the Valley of Vung