#1
I was looking through some of my journals that I write stuff in and found this one dated about a year ago.. Thought I'd post it up

Call me home
erase the scars
unlock the shadows
and vanquish the dark

Call me home
embrace my heart
cut off the chains
tied to worlds apart

Take me in
as who I am
never let go
of this wounded lamb

Cuz I'm forsaken
I am destroyed of this life
I am forsaken
with no guiding light

Erase the past
the riddles and lies
for all life is
bound with ties

Take me in
as who I am
never let go
of this wounded lamb

Cuz I'm forsaken
I am destroyed of this life
I am forsaken
With no guiding light
#2
pretty cool i think, nice sequencing, even makes a bit of sense if you think about it
Sorry if Ive offended some kind of Punk God I should brush up on my Commandments of Punk maybe copy down the Punk Bible a few thousand times so I don't forget again sorry for my error O Punk Master Of All Things That Are Punk .
#3
I like it, nice and simple with a great flow. Isn't always great when you are going through old stuff that you wrote and you find something that kinda stands out and surprises you and makes you smile a little? Its always cool to look back and see how your writing has progressed.
You and I are mortal, but rock n roll will never die.