#1
Decided to try my hand at this song after seeing the vid of their set at coachella. enjoy and crit for crit of course. its on my profile.
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#3
ha thanks, i tend to try and imitate singers subconsciously. I'm trying to break that habit a little bit
Quote by Sir-Shoelace
manliest string guage? barbed wire.

Founder Of the UG Slide Player's Guild, PM me If You're Really Feelin' Dem Blues

THE PIT
"better than your average psychiatrist"
#4
Pretty great, just listen to the third line of each verse more carefully, unless you were trying to vary it, you don't have the vocals quite right.
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