#1
you only love things oh so wrong,
all i can do is hum along,
I watch you and that smile fade away,
i no longer come out to play,
i'm letting the evil seep outside,
so i no longer have to lie,
maybe you should just take notes,
i really hate the day we first spoke,
ever since my hearts been broke,
yes im cruel and full of hate,
already damned so your to late,
your to late....yes you was a mistake.
hating something for far to long,
all i can do is grind along,
i watch you and it all fade away,
i no longer come out to play,
i'm letting the love die inside,
so no longer these words have to hide,
maybe you should just take notes,
the day we met is when my hope broke,
yes i'm cruel and full of hate,
already damned so your to late,
your to late,yes you was a mistake.
#2
yes im cruel and full of hate,
already damned so your to late,
your to late....yes you was a mistake.

correct this bad english

hmm and well i liked this part

maybe you should just take notes,
i really hate the day we first spoke,

overall not too bad.
#3
i agree with motimon that (your to late.. yes you was a mistake) should be changed to (you were a mistake) but other than that its great,
Sorry if Ive offended some kind of Punk God I should brush up on my Commandments of Punk maybe copy down the Punk Bible a few thousand times so I don't forget again sorry for my error O Punk Master Of All Things That Are Punk .