Needs reverb on the beginning, that'll sound a whole lot better. The clean lead was too overpowering. The riffs that followed after the intro are nice, I think the rythym would sound a lot better if you double tracked it. Your lead needs more reverb also. The drums are midi I bet, it fills in and does it's job but it would've sounded a lot better with something like Beatcraft, EZDrummer, or Hammerhead (which is free). Good work, it sounds real limited although, it has lots of potential. Keep it up.