#1
Ok, so this is the first set of lyrics i have ever written i have any ideas on the name yet so if you have any ideas feel free to say them


We used to be so happy when we walked along the street,
Taking up the path when our hands were intertwined.
We laughed at everyone who laughed at us,
The world was ours when our love was combined.

What happened to us in our times of need?
You weren’t beside me when I needed you the most.
You needed me and I came running to you,
I realised our love was but a ghost.

You were in love with someone else,
You played me like a fool,
You didn’t feel the real thing,
I thought you were so cool.
I found you in your room,
With my so called best friend,
I really thought you loved me,
Does it really have to end?

I loved the days we used to play in the park,
Have picnics and end up throwing it around.
I had cake in my face and it was just so funny,
I can’t look at the photos without laughing on the ground.

But now that I see that it was all a lie,
I see that the memories can’t be real.
I loved the fake times that we had,
I just wish it didn’t make me feel the way I feel.

You were in love with someone else,
You played me like a fool,
You didn’t feel the real thing,
I thought you were so cool.
I found you in your room,
With my so called best friend,
I really thought you loved me,
Does it really have to end?

You were in love with someone else,
You played me like a fool,
You didn’t feel the real thing,
I thought you were so cool.
I found you in your room,
With my so called best friend,
I really thought you loved me,
This really is the end!

#2
Pretty damned good just 1 criticism, "I loved the fake times that we had,//
I just wish it didn’t make me feel the way I feel." i think would work much better as "I loved the fake times that we had,//
I just wish it didn’t make me feel so sad."

Other than that, great
Blinded by the exertions of man
I stumble through the haze of modern malfunctions


Dropping myself into darkness
#3
fair point...i can see what you are getting at Major Bob and thanks, means a lot
#5
i love it, absolutely awesome
Sorry if Ive offended some kind of Punk God I should brush up on my Commandments of Punk maybe copy down the Punk Bible a few thousand times so I don't forget again sorry for my error O Punk Master Of All Things That Are Punk .