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Hey guys,this is my first time writing a song.I wrote this song immediately after i quarreled with my parents because of money woes.So if i did it badly,please give me some pointers to take note of ok?I am not very good with my english but here is my work


When the tears stopped flowing
I realised that I am losing
A struggle between blood and money
The latter always win

If you are poor
Nobody cares
But if you are rich
Everybody wants a share

In this world we lived in
Money is our priority
Being rich makes things easier
By ten times more than being poor

If you are poor
Nobody Cares
But if you are rich
Everybody wants a share

Why cant we just be friendly
In this world that we lived in
Try to live in harmony
Stop war and fighting