#1
actually not by me totally, but i have helped out a bit.

it's one of my bands songs


When Angels Fall


things are going down
all my dreams are crashing
i try to turn it around
but i hear you laughing
my thoughts turn to fire
i feel pain everywhere
see in your face
such an evil stare

---chorus---
when angels fall
they take the world with them
when demons crawl
you can hear their screams
when people lie
no one picks you up
until you realize
that you're not tough
---/chorus---

when the tears hit the ground
they start to run
until you hear the sound
of what the lightnings done
and the stars collide
to make the world seem real
just open your eyes
and start to feel!

chorus x2

solo

end
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Last edited by plunkett at Dec 24, 2009,
#2
That's beautiful....

Actually bought a tear to my eye, do you have a recording of the song + What's your abnd called?
#3
I really liked this; my only problems is with your way of presenting it. I advise using capitalization correctly in your pieces, it will aid in people taking you more seriously. Still, that's really my only complaint; this piece sounds really good to me.


C4C? Anything from my sig would be nice.
#4
Quote by phan
That's beautiful....

Actually bought a tear to my eye, do you have a recording of the song + What's your abnd called?



not yet, but soonish. and [lol] Rape The Willing. our only recording is the old singer and it sucks ass
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#5
love it
Sorry if Ive offended some kind of Punk God I should brush up on my Commandments of Punk maybe copy down the Punk Bible a few thousand times so I don't forget again sorry for my error O Punk Master Of All Things That Are Punk .
#7
i liked the part that says "No one picks you up until you realize your not tough" ... thought prevoking
Originally posted by adVENTURA
if your in a punk band just do like Lars and Tim in rancid and scream like you got marbles in your mouth.

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#9
loved it, no other coment
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