the very first riff is wrong in one spot... :/ as well as the second... as well as the ending of the first breakdown... idk it seems like you took shortcuts or didnt analyze the song closely enough. yeah and ur right most of the breakdowns have poor timing/are kinda muddy.
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dude dont let it discourage you, it just means you gotta take another look at the song and really put a lot of time into it, ABR is definitely not an easy band to cover. Just don't settle for half a job is what I'm saying, you can totally get it down i bet.