Ive never heard the original song before but that was sounded pretty good. Your guitar was solid, I didnt hear any mess ups. You have a good voice too, I can tell you practice alot but I think you would sound better if you belt it out more? Your sister also has a nice voice as well. Not really too much to else say about this, good job on it. I found myself entirely unoffended by it (which is a good thing).

Good Job and thanks for your crit.
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