#1
i am sunlight
i am moonlight
i am dancing shadow in the rain
i am a whisper
i stop and falter
i cannot see through this pain

what's real and whats fake
try to see through my shroud
if waking was a mistake
i cannot tell anymore
through this shifting color
that makes up my world

i am sunlight
i am moonlight
i am dancing shadow in the rain
i am a whisper
i stop and falter
i cannot see through this pain

shifting, endless patterns in my head
close my eyes to watch them
am i dying soon to be dead
will i live to see another day
close my eyes and fade away
or is it just a dream

peace i do not know
i sleep and dream of pain
or angels who run from me
i wake and face the same
but know not why they flee
its not death i fear,
for i cannot wait to go

the title on this one was really hard :P, im still not entirely sure it suits,
Sorry if Ive offended some kind of Punk God I should brush up on my Commandments of Punk maybe copy down the Punk Bible a few thousand times so I don't forget again sorry for my error O Punk Master Of All Things That Are Punk .
#3
Quote by bösepriester
cool rhyme scheme
may i ask what genre it is? could make a cool hard rock song


right on the money, hard rock metaly kinda thing , i need someone to do guitars for it cause my piano just doesnt cut it
Sorry if Ive offended some kind of Punk God I should brush up on my Commandments of Punk maybe copy down the Punk Bible a few thousand times so I don't forget again sorry for my error O Punk Master Of All Things That Are Punk .
#6
i like it, its smooth
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#7
Quote by bösepriester
you dont play guitar?

i play........ about as well as a zombie.....
:P
much better at piano


everyone else, THANKS, you rule
Sorry if Ive offended some kind of Punk God I should brush up on my Commandments of Punk maybe copy down the Punk Bible a few thousand times so I don't forget again sorry for my error O Punk Master Of All Things That Are Punk .