#1
Just spent a few hours making this song, Chocolate Money, it's on my profile, just wondering if anyone would like to criticise it a bit?

Personally, I feel that my microphone technique could be better, and the end could have been on a long fade out, but I'm not sure about that, I think the end is ok.

I'm quite proud of the wah- rhythym guitar, the bass sound, and also the almost OTT chorus vocals..


Your thoughts?
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#2
the vocals are all to the same tune it doesnt change and when it does it sounds forced and not natural (like sharp turns)
#3
Yeah I know what you mean, I think I was struggling to get pieces to fit in rhythmically, and maybe not focussing on the melody as much as I could have.
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