#1
Insane


Take your hands off my shoulders
I need some time to work this out
Inside me there's wrong
A complication of the soul

Chorus
Do i love or do i hate you
I can't deny I'm insane
I'm a prisoner of my own conscience
And this twisted state of mind
I'm your crutch

Verse
As I sit here on this alter
Bent and broken by your hand
Inside me there's something wrong
A once warm heart.... turns cold

Chorus
Do i love of do i hate you
I can't deny I'm insane
I'm a prisoner of my own conscience
And this twisted state of mind
I'm your crutch


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Originally posted by adVENTURA
if your in a punk band just do like Lars and Tim in rancid and scream like you got marbles in your mouth.

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#2
wow... no one ...

::Edit:: maybe i should move this to Riffs and Recordings
Originally posted by adVENTURA
if your in a punk band just do like Lars and Tim in rancid and scream like you got marbles in your mouth.

Check out my Music Here
Last edited by Dezerado at Dec 31, 2009,
#3
I think the lyrics are a LITTLE BIT too sloppy/unclear. I'd also like it better if the chorus would be more upbeat, almost angry.

Overall good performance.