#1
Hey guys! I wrote my first song EVER! and just want to know what you guys think?

Here you go! Lyrics are in the sidebar of the video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FhaN-zIZsRw
#2
good job ... especially for this being your first song
the chorus reminds me a bit of Jack johnson
other than that keep singing, there were certain spots where your vocals was a bit off but in time that'll work itself out
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