#1
So, another piece of mine. Kind of melodic and unusual for me, still very simple. C4C, as always, of course.

EDIT: a bit corrected version of the song.
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Last edited by Gwrhkhsh at Dec 28, 2009,
#2
hey man here's my crit

im not going into detail cuz i think the whole piece still lacks a lot , its cinda boring and to repetitive and it all sound very basic and there is just not a whole lot going on that is interesting.

i say it has potential allthough you gotta add some more things and delete some parts to make it interesting.

anyway can you crit any of my songs ? there in my sig.