#2
It reminds me of Counting Crows for some reason, or someone I could be using the wrong names

It wasn't bad, you were flat in some parts, the guitar playing could be cleaned up a lot, and the vocals should be turned down a bit. Maybe add some reverb or some drums/bass make it sound a little bigger, but I liked it melody/lyricly wise.

Crit mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22746602#post22746602
#3
You have a great voice! Yeah, just a little flat in some parts, but I'd continue singing like that with a little pitch fixes in the small spots. I love your timbre, control, and pronunciation, though. The guitar could be a little more solid, but the composition is excellent. Superb for a first recording, definitely keep it up!

c4c on mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1252617