#1
Wrote an old song a while back which i used to jam to and turned it into a song. drums are from guitar pro 5 don't hate em. it's called supernatural for now. if you can think of a better name let me know.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=971425
(there's a version without the crappy gp5 drums uploaded in my profile)

will c4c as well.
Last edited by madshatter at Dec 30, 2009,
#2
It sounds good, but it still sounds more like a jam than a song, your rhythm guitar never changes, all it does is play the same two chords over and over again. Your lead was great, really inventive for only using a two chord rhythm. The drums need to come up in the mix, they were hardly audible. I think you could make this a decent song by just giving it a simple verse and chorus structure.

Great lead playing though.

Crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22769987#post22769987