So this is my newest song. I have to say I like it very much and feedback is appreciated greatly. C4C of course...

A Faster Lightning Storm
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Crit as I'm listening:

So far, this is not what I was thinking it would be haha Vocals need to be turned up. Reminds me of Golden Years a little bit. The breakdown was really cool. Vocals also remind me of a Beck a little bit (at times). The ending was also really cool with the triplet (or whatever rhythm that is on the keyboard). All in all It's a pretty cool tune, unique. I'd mix it so there is a little more sound in the center of the mix, everything seems to be panned off to the sides pretty extremely, or just turn up the vocals a bit more, that might help. Have a good newyears day! Keep Creating Tunes

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