#1
my second try for a decent text :

Breaking sunshine on the water
Leaping up over the walls in my head
Live the silence of amazed
and I don’t know what it is/to do/it means/to say

In my head
there's part of you
there's part of me
and I don't know how to find
which one is who's (2x?)
I'm so confused

little fragments seem to broaden
everything that comes to mind
there is nothing I can find
and I don't know
don't know what it is

In my head
there's part of you
there's part of me
and I don't know how to find
which one is who's (2x?)
I'm so confused

sinking deep below the surface
Is this doubtful lonely world in my head
live the silence of amazed
and I don't know
don't know what it is

outro
#3
Quote by JayPresto
i really like that dude, probably the best i've ever read in this forum.

Wow, thank you!

uhm, what I forgot to ask, are there any serious/aggravating grammar mistakes or wierd word choices in my song? I don't really know, english is not my mother tongue...