#2
wow. thats really good dude. keep it up

as for critting, it seems a little repetitive

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Last edited by dlguitarmaster7 at Jan 1, 2010,
#3
Sounds pretty good. The riff is catchy, but it gets a tiny repetitive. Once you add the lyrics, though, i think it'll be fine.
Also the solo was awesome. I would have thought that you were just showing off, but since you admitted that you were showing off, it was good
Only part I didn't really like so much was the drums, but that's probably the best that you can do with a computer, eh?
Overall I liked it though. Great work.

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then the Devil is 6, then the Devil is 6, then the Devil is 6, the Devil is 6,
And if the Devil is 6,

then God is 7, then God is 7, then God is 7
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#4
Thats awesome man I really enjoyed it, you are now a personal favorite of mine!
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#6
hey dude! good to see you here again. very funky as usual. the bass sounds good but it's mixed way too high. i love the little fills you do. you have some timing issues, but not too much. just could use a bit work. please god turn down the bass.

solo is awesome! haha very nice. i like


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