www.myspace.com/sikmind (king of your world)

its kinda comical tell me what you think its for a special girl in my life... she knows who she is... haha thanks and ill crit yours too just leave the link down there

Hey bro,
Thanks for your nice crit and kind words. I'm happy to take a listen to your tune.

The intro guitars are nice and moody. The spoken word is a little goofy though haha =] Kind of a western feel. I really like the vocal harmonies and multiple tracks. The low, distorted line is really cool.

I really like the sound of this, you have a surprisingly nice voice! I'd really like to hear this song in full arrangement with drums and bass. Really cool uprising harmony. My only real crit is that the vocals are a little pitchy sometimes. Other than that, its a really cool tune you have there, chief!