#1
www.myspace.com/sikmind (king of your world)

its kinda comical tell me what you think its for a special girl in my life... she knows who she is... haha thanks and ill crit yours too just leave the link down there


-SikMind
OneLove
#2
Hey bro,
Thanks for your nice crit and kind words. I'm happy to take a listen to your tune.

The intro guitars are nice and moody. The spoken word is a little goofy though haha =] Kind of a western feel. I really like the vocal harmonies and multiple tracks. The low, distorted line is really cool.

I really like the sound of this, you have a surprisingly nice voice! I'd really like to hear this song in full arrangement with drums and bass. Really cool uprising harmony. My only real crit is that the vocals are a little pitchy sometimes. Other than that, its a really cool tune you have there, chief!