#1
i was told my problems were imaginary
They never get to far from me
judging by the way I reacted
They were just hazy thoughts and darkened serenity
that filled my moments of rage misconception

memories, sad stories tend to fill up inside of me
prevaricates what I stood up for in you
the birds never fly often here again
the empty nest left is just memories nonetheless
of what should be a calm devotion

you couldn't break the silence even if you try
the barricade it forms would tear the sanity in you
My shadow is what i have left here with me
it accompanies me like an alternate form of you
but it never runaway from me

This shouldn't be the end
This shouldn't be the end
This shouldn't be the end
This shouldn't be the end

the barricade is now broken
the problems are real
the birds are all dead
the silence is torn apart
and you're really gone

i was told my problems were imaginary
but this just wasn't it
Quote by ATM*
cool, two reports in one thread. You, sir, are a superstar.

*reported*

*again*


i'm a superstar
#3
Quote by Karel Juwet
you're a superstar


you're just trying to get sigged aren't you?
Quote by ATM*
cool, two reports in one thread. You, sir, are a superstar.

*reported*

*again*


i'm a superstar
#4
Quote by rafael90
you're just trying to get sigged aren't you?


Quote by rafael90
you're just trying to get sigged aren't you?

no, really, I like the flow in the last verse, and I don't know how you would make those bit uneven lines work, but I bet you will. But I was talking about the content here, really nice ideas, and imagery.
I couldn't do better, and as I saw your signature, I thought "hey, I'll write that, that would be suitable here xD"

And btw, you allready have a signature which says you're a superstar, so you most likely wouldn't put that in there a second time huh?

kind regards, Karel Juwet
#5
thnx mate

Quote by ATM*
cool, two reports in one thread. You, sir, are a superstar.

*reported*

*again*


i'm a superstar