#2
You should definitely keep developing it. I like where its heading. That being said the sound becomes a little muddled and indistinguishable when the lead guitar comes in and in my personal opinion 20 seconds into a song is a little early for a break, but hey thats your call. keep working on it and post it when your done, good start though
#3
Thanks. Don't worry about the sound problems, it's only the Guitar Pro Version.
And it's not a break really, it's more like a bridge.

All I want to know it's if you like its melody and direction.
Cheers!