#1
Pillars
Watching this moment
The skyline cracks
Watching this moment
The image unwinds
Reality without purpose

Who will catch you
When the pillars fall

(Instrumental)

Watching a moment
An abstraction to pass
Watching a moment
Reality
Watching a moment
A moment

Who will catch you
When the pillars fall
Who will catch you
When the pillars fall
Where will you stand
Where will you
Where will you

(Solo)

When the pillars (fall)
Who (who will catch you)
When the pillars (fall)
When the pillars (fall)
When the pillars supporting you come away
When the pillars supporting you come away
Where will you stand
Who will catch you
When the pillars fall
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Little solace comes
to those who grieve
as thoughts keep drifting
as walls keep shifting
and this great blue world of ours
seems a House of Leaves

My Rig
Quote by Will Swanson
HeavyReverb = Hero of The Pit 2010.
Quote by I-Shot-Jr
You sir are my absolute hero.
Last edited by HeavyReverb at Jan 2, 2010,
#2
well i'm new to the songwriting and lyrics section... so i'm not quite sure what i'm supposed to say. but i guess i'll just say i like it, sounds like it could be a good song, upload it when you've got the music and i'll give it a listen.
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#3
The simple phrasings and wording are very effective in this piece. The repetitions and flow are great as well.

I'm not sure I want to read that an instrumental section/guitar solo is imminent now, though - those pieces of information dont explain me much, except break the flow a bit The poetry should stand by itself in places like these, imo But thats but a detail!
Overall I like this piece quite a lot

I would love to hear this in context with music (when will it be out?)
#4
I started recording the rough demo today so it should be up in a week or so.
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Little solace comes
to those who grieve
as thoughts keep drifting
as walls keep shifting
and this great blue world of ours
seems a House of Leaves

My Rig
Quote by Will Swanson
HeavyReverb = Hero of The Pit 2010.
Quote by I-Shot-Jr
You sir are my absolute hero.