#1
Behind this big strong composure
Is a small and frail posture
Pushed up with confusion
And held up by the anger
Lying through my teeth
Never know whats beneath
And although the pain will ease
The hurting will never cease
I will pretend
Until the end
That nothing hurts
And hope it works.


I got bored and just Jotted down a few lines.
#2
"Behind this big strong composure
Is a small and frail posture"

pointless and overdescriptive. I don't even think this makes sense, really.

"Pushed up with confusion
And held up by the anger"

yeah... no.

"Lying through my teeth
Never know whats beneath"

forced rhyme, doesn't make sense.

"And although the pain will ease
The hurting will never cease"

makes even less sense.

"I will pretend
Until the end
That nothing hurts
And hope it works."

uhh, okay.

don't mean to diss you too hard! I know you were just bored and whatnot, but, it's garbage.