i liked it, singing went out of tune quite a bit especially when the male singer came in. you need to work on the intro, and the tone of the guitar. the drumming was quite appropriate but you need to keep in time during changes from chorus to verse and stuffff. gets a bit cliche after a while but it would sound a lot better with a descent recording. tune the guitar better. solo was out of time. you got the right idea though. keep practicing!

defianately would benefit from a bass
Last edited by n to the k at Jan 4, 2010,
Hey thanks for the reply! But my band was asking what do you mean by sounding cliche? like the lyrics? or the structure?