#1
if youve got time have a listen to [German bus stop] in my profile.

any comments and criticism would be appreciated.
#2
Not terrible but it seemed a bit boring. I feel like vocals could have made parts of it great, though. Also, I'm not sure the transition at around 1:40 really fit the beginning of the song. They were two nice sections, but I din't think they fit together too well. But I would say add vocals to it
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My cover of Manchester Orchestra's "I Can Feel Your Pain"
http://www.mediafire.com/?jfvt54j4mkiiq99
#3
im not that happy with it myself and i have a voice like a reversed fart so singings out the window.....