#1
no name yet...these lyrics are most likely bad just a rough thought though. Wrote them while listening to atreyu which is how this will probably be used. Ill tweak them feel free to give input or thought.(Please disregard any bad spelling or short hand wrote this on my phone) ty.


Once A dream now ravaged by disease
So much for love u good night and sweet dreams
How could I ever believe you even thought about me
I trusted you but I can still smell him on your sleeve

Heres to being alone ,so cold ,feeling condemned
Day by day the hate makes me insane
Go ahead and try there's nothing left
What we had is gone give it a rest

It's sickening your chances aren't slim They are non existing
this ship has sank This is the end
**** you I won't forgive I will only forget
Go ahead let it sink in, your right this really is the the end

Heres to being alone ,so cold ,feeling condemned
Day by day the hate makes me insane
Go ahead and try there's nothing left
What we had is gone give it a rest

I got hurt by a ***** like you and even felt it
I may be weak but now you're helpless
Id rather be cold and lifeless
Then see you be so ****ing heartless

Heres to being alone ,so cold ,feeling condemned
Day by day the hate makes me insane
Go ahead and try there's nothing left
What we had is gone give it a rest
GEAR!
Schecter c-1 hellraiser
Rivera Knucklehead tre
Rocktron 4x12 vintage celestion 30's
Digitech digidelay
Degitech bad monkey
Digitech compressor/sustainer
Elixer stings 10-51
dunlop picks .60mm
#4
Thanks man. i hope it doesn't rant to much. if i get a good word from here ill start recording a little bit on it and post it up also.
GEAR!
Schecter c-1 hellraiser
Rivera Knucklehead tre
Rocktron 4x12 vintage celestion 30's
Digitech digidelay
Degitech bad monkey
Digitech compressor/sustainer
Elixer stings 10-51
dunlop picks .60mm
#5
sorry about the spacing on the punctuation, my iphone was being an ass and didn't want to select the spot i wanted to insert.Then i used copy paste and didn't pay attention.
GEAR!
Schecter c-1 hellraiser
Rivera Knucklehead tre
Rocktron 4x12 vintage celestion 30's
Digitech digidelay
Degitech bad monkey
Digitech compressor/sustainer
Elixer stings 10-51
dunlop picks .60mm
Last edited by ebelcher122 at Jan 5, 2010,
#7
well hell yeah then im pretty good at ranting.This is my 1st attempt at a hardcore/metalcore w/e song and i think it turned out pretty well actually.
GEAR!
Schecter c-1 hellraiser
Rivera Knucklehead tre
Rocktron 4x12 vintage celestion 30's
Digitech digidelay
Degitech bad monkey
Digitech compressor/sustainer
Elixer stings 10-51
dunlop picks .60mm
#8
Yeah I think it's awesome. Do you plan on arranging this into a full song and recording it? If so I'd like to hear it.
#9
yes i do ill post it all up. ill lay down some rough guitar tracks and record it.
GEAR!
Schecter c-1 hellraiser
Rivera Knucklehead tre
Rocktron 4x12 vintage celestion 30's
Digitech digidelay
Degitech bad monkey
Digitech compressor/sustainer
Elixer stings 10-51
dunlop picks .60mm